Sample Feedback | TargetCLB

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See how TargetCLB structures CELPIP Writing and Speaking feedback.

These static examples show the report hierarchy TargetCLB is building toward: CELPIP practice estimate, confidence, rubric categories, strengths, weaknesses, fixes, improved direction, and drills.

CELPIP Writing

Task achievement, coherence, vocabulary, grammar, tone/register

CELPIP Speaking

Fluency, organization, content development, pace, pauses/fillers

Static CELPIP report examples

The content below is not live AI output. It is a polished preview of CELPIP practice feedback shape and careful score wording.

Practice estimate onlyNext-step guidance

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CELPIP Writing feedback preview

Static product preview of the Writing feedback report shape.

Writing feedback

Report structure: estimate, confidence, rubric signals, priority fixes, improved sample, and drills.

Estimated level range

CLB 7-8

Confidence

Medium

Task achievement

Clear position, needs stronger support

Coherence

Logical but transitions are thin

Vocabulary

Appropriate, occasionally repetitive

Grammar

Mostly controlled with article/preposition slips

Tone/register

Suitable for formal response

Top strengths

Clear main idea and relevant response to the task.
Enough structure to follow the candidate position.

Top weaknesses

Some points need more specific evidence.
Language control weakens under timed pressure.

Improved sample direction

A stronger answer would state the recommendation earlier, group supporting reasons by priority, and close with a direct next step.

Specific fixes

Emphasize next actions and priority fixes.

Paragraph topic sentencesFormal registerSpecific support examples

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CELPIP Speaking feedback preview

Static product preview of the Speaking feedback report shape.

Speaking feedback

Report structure: estimate, confidence, rubric signals, priority fixes, improved sample, and drills.

Estimated level range

CLB 7-8

Confidence

Medium

Fluency

Steady with short pauses

Content development

Relevant, needs more concrete examples

Organization

Clear beginning and end

Vocabulary

Functional with room for precision

Grammar

Good control of simple structures

Pace

Slightly fast in the final sentence

Pauses/fillers

Moderate filler use

Top strengths

Clear main idea and relevant response to the task.
Enough structure to follow the candidate position.

Top weaknesses

Some points need more specific evidence.
Language control weakens under timed pressure.

Improved sample direction

A stronger response would add one concrete example, slow the final sentence, and reduce filler words before the recommendation.

Specific fixes

Emphasize next actions and priority fixes.

Timed opinion responseTransition phrasesPace control